Assignment 2: People and Activity Revised
Original version can be found at 26/06/20102.
For this exercise I
planned to photograph a play performed outdoors as part of the St
Albans Festival. I chose the comedy "The Importance of Being Ernest" by
Oscar Wilde. The play was performed in the grounds of St Albans
Cathedral.
I have tried to create a visual variety
between the images to make the whole set more interesting to look at.
The ten photographs were selected on their ability to show the telling
moments of the play and to convey to the viewer the relationships
between the performers. By providing a narrative it is more likely that
the viewer will "read" the images as a set.
When taking these images it would have been better to be able to move
around in front of the performers to get a variety of angles. However,
this was not possible as I would have obscured the view of the audience
who were seated on the ground close to the performers.
The photographs submitted for this assignment are critically assessed below:
|
2403 |
In this photograph there is an implied triangle, with
the vertical formed by Lady Bracknell and the apex at Gwendolen. The
triangle encompasses all of the cast and the diagonals create a
sensation of activity and dynamism in the image. I made sure that the
butler was holding a tray as a symbol of his position within the group.
The
image could be improved by the use of a fill light on the two
characters on the left as their faces are in shadow. Unfortunately it
was not appropriate to use a flash. This long range shot is useful as
an opening shot as it includes most of the main characters.
|
2411 |
Here there is a good implied line between the eyes of
Gwendolen and Jack. This helps to bind the two characters together.
This is one of the key moments in the play and the photograph gives the
viewer a sense of Jack's devotion to Gwendolen.
The image is a little unbalanced and the inclusion of the white table and chairs in the background are a little distracting.
In this revised image I cropped out some of the background to the left and right of the couple. The extra detail did not add anything to the photograph and was distracting. I included the table and chairs as they have the glasses and cake stand giving additional information.
|
2427 |
The diagonal positions of the legs of the two ladies
echo each other. The two subjects form two points in the image and this
has resulted in a well balanced image. The photograph was taken in
bright sunlight and this has caused the face of the subject on the left
to be slightly shaded. There is an implied line between the two ladies
formed by the line of sight from the woman on the right towards the
other woman. The photograph communicates successfully the intimate
relationship between the tutor and student.
|
2432 |
I wanted this photograph to convey the relationship
between the tutor, Miss Prism and the vicar. Miss Prism's closeness,
body language and gesture communicate this relationship. There is an
element of rhythm in the image with the two female heads leading to the
vicar who is turned toward them.
All three subjects are placed centrally in the frame, which gives the composition a slightly static feel.
I used a much tighter crop in this revised image so as to focus the viewer's attention on to the subjects' facial expressions.
|
2438 |
In this image I intended to communicate how much the
young inexperienced Cecily is taken by the more worldly Algernon. Her
body language conveys this well. There is an implied line formed
between the two players formed by the line of sight between Cecily and
Algernon.
The shot could have been taken from a slightly different
angle so as to include some of Algernon's face. Unfortunately this
would have obscured the scene from most of the audience.
I used a tighter crop in this revised image to help eliminate some of the background detail. I also added some blur around the to subjects so as to further focus the viewer's attention.
|
2454 |
In this photograph I wanted to show the intimacy of
the performance, with only a few feet between the performers and the
audience. The image conveys the audience's concentration on the
performers and their enjoyment of the play.
In this revised image I used a broader, flatter crop to remove some of the trees above the actors, which added nothing to what I was trying to say with the photograph.
|
2460 |
The body language of the two performers communicates
the intensity of feeling felt by Jack when warning Algernon off his
young ward, Cecily. Jack, by invading Algernon's personal space means
that the viewer is very aware of the strength of his passion. I wanted
the image to convey the extent of Jack's protective feelings towards his
ward. Again it would have been slightly better if the shot had been
taken directly in front of the two performers so as to show more of
Algernon's face.
|
2468 |
In this photograph, Algernon is proposing marriage to
Cecily. I wanted to convey to the viewer her acceptance of his
proposal. The lighting on Cecily's face works well due to the sun
shining from above and to the left of the frame. There is good eye
contact between the two performers providing an implied line.
|
2477 |
The emotion that I wanted to convey in this image is
that of mutual distrust within the formal bounds of society. Each is
sure of their own position as fiancée of Ernest but each is unsure of
the other's intentions.
The relative positions of the
two performers, one seated and the other standing is indicative of their
social standings. Gwendolen, standing has the higher social rank. The
bright sunlight has provided good lighting of the scene with a fair
amount of detail in the shadow areas. The plain background of the wall
of the cathedral allows the viewer to concentrate on the two performers.
|
2494 |
This photograph is of the final scene in the play
where Jack discovers that his real name is Ernest and that he is Lady
Bracknell's nephew. I wanted to convey the shock on the face of Miss
Prism when she is presented with the fact that she is largely
responsible for much of the lack of knowledge of Jack's origins.
The
implied triangle between Jack, the Gladstone bag and his aunt, Lady
Bracknell encompasses both the new found kinship between Jack and his
aunt, and the cause of his estrangement from his family.
For this revision I cropped out the actors that were not part of the "action". By using this tighter crop the gaze of the viewer is focussed on the moment of reaction.